On Thu, Jul 23, 2020 at 10:43:52AM -0600, Tracey Emery wrote:
> On Thu, Jul 23, 2020 at 10:29:59AM -0600, Todd C. Miller wrote:
> > On Thu, 23 Jul 2020 17:04:03 +0200, Stefan Sperling wrote:
> > 
> > > I propose to rewrite the entire paragraph in more detail to hopefully
> > > make the intended meaning clear. What do you think?
> > 
> > Definitely better, I just have some small comments inline to add
> > commas and tweak the wording slightly.
> > 
> >  - todd
> 
> Yup! Ok.

Comitted. Thanks to you both.